I was made by a man
with a dream. I am 10 feet tall and 130 inches wide. My creator crafted me with
a neon blue color of paper mache, which is a special type of paper; it’s so
rare not even Michael Jordan can have it. I was made into the beats headphones,
because I was so unique I already had things stuffed inside of me so people didn’t
have to buy things to put in me. I had all kinds of special prizes; I had huge
chocolate bars, mini sodas, Oreo’s, and much more! So one day I was just
minding my own business when one day a woman stopped and looked at me. I wanted
to say what are you looking at but of course piñatas can’t talk. The woman
picked me up took me to the register and out the store we went. 15 minutes
later we arrive at a huge house and I can see a lot of little kids running around
and screaming, hitting each other and crying. To myself I’m thinking lady why
am I here, but then she took me to the back yard. I spotted a sign that said
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TROY! So the lady hangs me up on a tree and hands Troy the
stick. He hits and hits and KABOOM! I broke open. All the kids are having a
good time until FEH FIH FOO FUMP! A little fat boy comes stomping towards all
the candy. He comes and pushes all the little kids out of the way and everybody’s
just staring at him gathering all that candy. So I say to myself there’s always
that one greedy little kid who’s just obligated to scarf down all the candy from everyone else. What a wonderful
birthday party.
I like your post , I like how you put a lot of details in describing your piñata and I like how you said" it's so rare not even Michael Jordan can have it"
ReplyDeleteA wonderful humorous story, however, in line nine you should have typed fifteen instead of 15. Also in line 9 you said the woman just picked you up which is controversial to what you said in line 1 about how you are 10 ft tall and 130 inches wide.
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